The script has a number of interesting components. One of the stand out aspects is the topical nature of the subject matter. Taking a “ripped from the headlines” approach, the story dramatizes the very real concerns and fears surrounding the world of the Internet of Things and Artificial Intelligence. As both the setting and the source of the dramatic question in play, the writer smartly focuses on the humans working from both corners of the conflict in this particular story — steering clear of the technological jargon and specifics and instead focusing on Mags et al’s objectives keeps the audience more engaged in the story and its outcome. Mags, as the protagonist, is like a friendlier version of the GIRL WITH THE DRAGON TATTOO; as someone incredibly competent but with a somewhat spiky demeanor, Mags is an interesting main character and has some dimension in which an actor could root a strong performance.
-Reviewer January 2019